"May 7, 2013"

I wrote this in my "Lyricist's Notebook" with a 6/8 meter, but doesn't it sound more like a semi-conversation or poem-that-doesn't-sound-like-a-poem rather than a song?

"Hi. That's what I said.

I make no commitment.

My name's Luke. Is that what you heard?

Good...walk on.

You may make my life

A million times better,

But I'll never know

Because I walked up to my room.

I wish I could go back, scratch out the missed opportunities,

The times I said, 'Go for it...wait no. Stop. It's too hard.

Just keep walking.'

Oh, I kick myself for no reason.

The most friends wins you the most hearts.

The most words - the most chances.

How do I make this living,

Charming people with nothing?

How do I do it? How am I supposed to do it?