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Sunday, March 8, 2009

New ending to "Let Me"

After the "Surrounded by myself, I'm giving up." line, there will be (No. I can't give up.)

Then, continuing the song from where I left off in the last post about "Let Me":

Let's go before I was thinking
That I could be that guy.

Let me cry.
Let me fall down one more time.
Let me cry.
But I will never say goodbye.

Let me cry.
Let me fall down one more time.
I'll still try.
I will never, never say goodbye.

I was just very troubled by the overall "giving up" mood of the song. I want to leave a bit of hope in the end.

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